08-27-2018, 05:34 PM
I've never seen such a detailed breakdown of someone fan fic before and I'm wondering if this is quite what Delgardo had in mind when he asked for feedback. Some fan fiction writers will ask someone to check their work before they post it, to catch any spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. I make a lot of spelling mistakes myself and have to check many times to get things right. Please remember that none of us are professional writers and that some of your remarks could be quite discouraging to someone who has never attempted fan fiction before.