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03-07-2015, 08:37 AM
Obviously the writing is impeccable. But I think you're right, restructure. Maybe set your self a question to answer, and maybe cut down on any unnecessary content. Oh and make it funny, remember tutors read the same words all day, end with a gag! Let us see the result.
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******PLEASE HAVE A LOOK****** - by Wisp - 03-05-2015, 07:43 PM
RE: ******PLEASE HAVE A LOOK****** - by Wisp - 03-05-2015, 08:12 PM
RE: ******PLEASE HAVE A LOOK****** - by Toad - 03-05-2015, 09:25 PM
RE: ******PLEASE HAVE A LOOK****** - by Wisp - 03-05-2015, 09:36 PM
RE: ******PLEASE HAVE A LOOK****** - by ricardo shillyshally - 03-07-2015, 08:37 AM
RE: ******PLEASE HAVE A LOOK****** - by Wisp - 03-10-2015, 04:27 PM

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